I have some idol in my mind, and my first idol is Nabi Muhammad S.A.W, he is my best idol. I want to tell you about my other idol, he is Travis Barker. Travis is a drummer of “Blink 182”, it is a popular band from London. Blink 182 have three personals, tom delonge as vocal and guitar rhytim, mark hoppus as Bassist/vocal, and the last of course Travis barker as drummer.
Blink 182 started their career in 1993. When I was two years old, Blink 182 gave a new genre, punk melodic, it is a fresh genre, they give a changed of music, when the band started their carrer, their drummer not Travis, but scott, In 1995 scott out from blink 182 and travis changed him, travis make a song be like a new spirit.
When travis was young, he have many girl friends, because some of girl interested to him, and now he have marriage. He have one wife, she is Melissa kenedy and he have two children, one boy landon Asher and one beautiful girl Allabama luella. In 2008 Travis got an accident, when he went to other country with airplane, and the airplane fall, he cannot playing drum around two years, it is made him sad.
Now Travis can play drum again, and Blink 182 have a new song. Travis crying when he comeback play drum for first after the accident, and the fans can look him again.
I think your essay is too short. Improve it as possible as you can.
BalasHapusSo, keep writing :)
yeaa, i will improve it ndah
BalasHapusYour idol is Travis Barker? He's a really good drummer and I like to see all his tattoo. So cool! Keep writing, boy! :)
BalasHapusYang membangun lah min :D
BalasHapuskeep attention about punctuation ramziiii. you used too many commas.
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