My name is Muhammad Ramzi, this is a short story about my self and all about me. People usually call me Ramzi or ji, I very like consume cheese, it’s not to importand. I graduated from SMAN 3 Padang and now. I continued my study in Universitas Negeri Padang in English department. Now I want to tell you about my childhood, my appearance, my habbits, hoby.
My childhood was very beautiful, I was born in Padang, November 10th 1992, around seventeen years ago. I was Kindergarden student at Semen Padang in Indarung, Padang. While I was child, I always played with my friends, I have many friends when I was a child, when I was a child I like singing, but I want to be a doctor fourteen years ago, when I was seven years old, I move to Siteba, and I continued my study in SDN 09 Siteba, I very enjoyed in there,I meet other friend, I often swimming in the river after finished study with my friend, and it was amazing.
While I was 12 years old, I continued my study in MTsN model Padang, my father ask me to join to Islam education, in there I got many experience and learned about the real Islam. There I got many experience, I met many new friends and did something new in my life. I like playing band, and I like to be a band player, I always to be a drummer and I often follow the competition In Padang, but I never be the winner the competition.
After that I continued my study at SMAN 3 Padang, an interested school for me. There I meet many friends, and they can make me laugh everyday and when I am in senior high school, it is the best time for me. by me, I am a funny boy and I hate “problem” because it is make me hurt, and I will always happy if I have a small problem, but it only make me confused and stress, and it is me.
And the last, I am majoring at Universitas Negeri Padang, I entry with English department in 2010, I think I feel so different in there, I must change my bad habbits, and make my parents to be happy, and I must appreciate my life, because life is not come for two times.
It will be better if you put some picture in your essay.
BalasHapusand about yourself, I think you are an interesting person.
Thank you, and keep writing :)
*still keep attention about punctuation.
BalasHapus*it’s = it is. like mr. saunir said, do not use contraction sign (') in writing.
*by the way, I was born on november, 10th too ramzii, but in 1991. you should call me uni. haha :D