Senin, 02 Mei 2011

Parents, brother, and friendship



I have many lovely person, they are social persons, we will not stand up in here without people around us, and I will tell about my lovely persons, they always around me, if I happy and if I sad, and very need of them, they always give me new spirit, this is my life.
The first one is my parents, we cannot forget them, they always helped me everytime. I often make my parent sad, but they never stop support me, they always teaching me, like attitude, education and etc. I know, if I was sad they will ask to me, although we often miss understanding, but they always make me happy, and many knowledge I get learning from them, they can be my friend, my parent, and other, I love my parents.
Next is my brother, I have four brother, they are funny person, I never forget when they anger with me because I doing something bad, it is make they sad, they are clever people, and my mom often make a different to me and them, but it is not make me sad, I know my parents doing that because they want to make me better then before, and my brother always give me spirit, they are a good man for me.
Then, my friendship, I have many friends, but not all can be my friendship, in junior High school I meet new friends after I graduated from elementary school, and they to be my friendship until now, and I always tell to them if i have something trouble or other, and we often doing something funny, like homestay together, or go to some place, and in Senior High School I have friendship too, but they still here until we graduated, and I very comfortable if I with them, they are a very best person for me.
We can not wasting time, because life not come for two times, and we must respect to my lovely person, because they stay for me and I must stay for them, I want to make my life happy with my lovely person around me.

3 komentar:

  1. In paragraph 1 line 1 "person" should be change to be "people" because it's plural.
    You also have many wrong grammatical.
    And that's good if you want to make your life happy with your lovely people.
    Thank you, and keep writing :)

    BalasHapus
  2. *keep attention about punctuation, you used too many commas sign.
    *I have four brother = I have four brothers.
    *add soome pictures :D

    BalasHapus
  3. good writing, even though there are some wrong grammars and punctuation.

    BalasHapus