Senin, 02 Mei 2011

How to make simple sandwich

                 Sandwich is one of Italian food, it’s have famous for a long time, because sandwich can be your friend, and not hard to make it,  If  you feel hungry, and you don’t know must make something you can make simple sandwich in your house, you know, sandwich can make you full, and then sandwich is healthy because it have vegetable and meet. let’s start make it.
                Ingredients, you must have 2 or 4 slices of bread, and cheddar cheese, and then tomato sauce, onions, Strawberry just for accessories, a milk, knife, some plate a cup and toothpicks, if you don’t like milk, you can leaving it and don’t use milk.
                And we will start make it, and following the steps, the first, place one slice of bread on plate or counter, and the second you must add onions to bread slice, now put cheddar cheese on the bread, and then put tomato sauce on the bread, next put milk in cup at this time, if you don’t need  milk, you must not put it, after that fold bread in half, and you can eat it now.
                I think sandwich is nice simple food from our consume, because it can changed rice for Indonesian people, and it make full, and I think for other people same like me, good luck and have practice.

5 komentar:

  1. you use wrong grammar, like "it have" in paragraph one last line. it should be "it has".
    you use so many commas and "and". after modals you should use verb one, in last paragraph second line you wrote "can changed", that's wrong.
    so, keep writing and revise it to improve your writing.
    but you should make it to me, i'd love to eat it :)

    BalasHapus
  2. you're wrong in some grammars. use grammar check before you post it to blog. Some sentences in this procedure still use Indonesian style. Keep writing, Ramzi :)

    BalasHapus
  3. do not use contraction in writing. too many commas.
    it is interesting..

    BalasHapus
  4. do not use conjunction in beginning paragraph,and it is too short but i think it is interesting.n_n

    BalasHapus